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So, I'm entering the final stages of this shikifuku, and I wanted some opinions on a few of the details. I'm a little less than pleased with them, but I can't figure out exactly what to do to make them better, and my mom is unhelpful and has too much faith in me or something, and thus says that everything looks fine to her ^^; So, comments and such are appreciated...trying to make this masquerade-worthy ^^;
Front Crest: 1 2 3
Sleeve Crests: 1 2 3 4
EDIT: Slow me, I forgot the reference pics ^^; One and two
Front Crest: 1 2 3
Sleeve Crests: 1 2 3 4
EDIT: Slow me, I forgot the reference pics ^^; One and two
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Date: 2004-03-22 07:56 pm (UTC)From:no subject
Date: 2004-03-22 08:41 pm (UTC)From:And the front crest looks pretty good. Petals could be shaped a little more. Just a tad.
I'm nitpicking <.<;;
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Date: 2004-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)From:Also on the sleeves - the lines do look a little wobbily and just a -tinytiny- bit too thin. But I think that maybe they only look thin because of the wobbly look it has close up. Another thing - the darker black of the petals on the sleeves... I can't tell if they are there on your's... curious if you are leaving that out or haven't done it yet? (Btw, the star on the sleeve in pic 3 looks awesome)
^^;; I know I'm no good person to talk (yay value village *nervous laughter) but you asked and I responded I guess? Gomen if all of this sounds awful. Overall they look -good,- but if you wanted comments on how to be 'better' then... there?
Did you do all that with paint btw?
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Date: 2004-03-23 01:54 am (UTC)From:Awesome work, it must've been really fiddly! ^__^