practicality

So, I'm entering the final stages of this shikifuku, and I wanted some opinions on a few of the details. I'm a little less than pleased with them, but I can't figure out exactly what to do to make them better, and my mom is unhelpful and has too much faith in me or something, and thus says that everything looks fine to her ^^; So, comments and such are appreciated...trying to make this masquerade-worthy ^^;

Front Crest: 1 2 3

Sleeve Crests: 1 2 3 4

EDIT: Slow me, I forgot the reference pics ^^; One and two