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I really meant to post it with the challenge fic yesterday morning, but totally forgot, however, it's amusing enough to deserve a post of it's own. This was Grace's suggestion for some dialouge in it, as she was reading over the half finished version in class:
Subaru:"Seishirou-san, I've been waiting nine years to say this, and it's been nine years too long. I...care about you. More than I have for anyone else in my life, save Hokuto-chan. You hurt me, you destroyed my life, and I couldn't stop caring. I tried, but I couldn't. What I feel is just that strong. And I just wanted you to know that. That you are the most important person in the world to me."
Seishirou:...So, you've kissed the Blarney Stone, eh?
(For those who don't know, kissing the Blarney Stone is supposed to give one the power of eloquence with words, especially in romantic situatations ^^)
Subaru:"Seishirou-san, I've been waiting nine years to say this, and it's been nine years too long. I...care about you. More than I have for anyone else in my life, save Hokuto-chan. You hurt me, you destroyed my life, and I couldn't stop caring. I tried, but I couldn't. What I feel is just that strong. And I just wanted you to know that. That you are the most important person in the world to me."
Seishirou:...So, you've kissed the Blarney Stone, eh?
(For those who don't know, kissing the Blarney Stone is supposed to give one the power of eloquence with words, especially in romantic situatations ^^)
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Date: 2004-02-05 10:28 pm (UTC)From:......Subaru as a Bond girl....XD XD;;;
I'm done now <.<;;
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Date: 2004-02-05 10:47 pm (UTC)From:And now I have amusing mental images of Subaru in unnessecarily skimpy and tight clothing with lots of guns and cheesey dialouge ^^
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Date: 2004-02-05 11:09 pm (UTC)From:XD!! Not that Seishirou didn't have cheesy dialogue anyway in Tokyo Babylon, so Seishirou's really all set! Unless you meant Subaru...then he'll need some work <.< But skimpy clothing....:D That image in my head just is going to stay there for a while XD XD