That was awesome ;). Imagine that, Seishirou giving someone a moral lesson... tasty, tasty irony. And I'm pleased to note that Seishirou was his usual arrogant bastard self.

One bone to pick though- I can't stand the use of underline instead of italics in a story ;(.

Other than that, though, a very creative take on the original. (Seishirou's The Man).