http://ext_25570/ ([identity profile] ext_25570) wrote in [personal profile] practicality 2006-08-10 09:10 am (UTC)

Awww, you know how much I love Virgil/Dante. And meeting in Purgatory is truly sweet (although there will eventually be no need for Purgatory when the world ends). I certainly prefer your version to the parting in the poem.

A few spelling issues are all I could find to correct:
- Quiet stretchs out
- The anniversery of our
- in that fateful woods

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