http://ext_201774/ ([identity profile] ext_201774) wrote in [personal profile] practicality 2004-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)

If you are looking for little things...

Then I agree with shineko the front crest pretty much looks good, but the petals could use a little more shape definition... like the niches in them. But really... they do look good how they are. That is just how they could be a little closer to the reference.

Also on the sleeves - the lines do look a little wobbily and just a -tinytiny- bit too thin. But I think that maybe they only look thin because of the wobbly look it has close up. Another thing - the darker black of the petals on the sleeves... I can't tell if they are there on your's... curious if you are leaving that out or haven't done it yet? (Btw, the star on the sleeve in pic 3 looks awesome)

^^;; I know I'm no good person to talk (yay value village *nervous laughter) but you asked and I responded I guess? Gomen if all of this sounds awful. Overall they look -good,- but if you wanted comments on how to be 'better' then... there?

Did you do all that with paint btw?


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