http://ext_374336/ ([identity profile] ext_374336) wrote in [personal profile] practicality 2004-03-22 08:41 pm (UTC)

Just my thought on the sleeves, but the lines could be a little more straight. Probably a teeny bit thicker too - the red lines. But you know me and my inexperience with such things. This is all I could really pick up :/

And the front crest looks pretty good. Petals could be shaped a little more. Just a tad.

I'm nitpicking <.<;;

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